great work... i really like the birds and the butterflys, and the trees in grey nice efect, nice composition great work.... the only think i don't get at all is the dots line at the bottom of the image...
anyway is a great work
1) Black and white is always sexy, nice use of red highlight.
2) The vector work is sharp and clear and looks great.
The bad:
1) The shadow. Seriously, kill the shadow
2) Font choice is terrible. It doesn\'t illustrate the overall meaning of the piece at all, doesn\'t mesh.
If i were you i\'d consider adding to this. Add the same object again, different colour, different angle, make it more of a composition and less of an illustration. Good idea and good skill, execution could use some more work.
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anyway is a great work
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1) Black and white is always sexy, nice use of red highlight.
2) The vector work is sharp and clear and looks great.
The bad:
1) The shadow. Seriously, kill the shadow
2) Font choice is terrible. It doesn\'t illustrate the overall meaning of the piece at all, doesn\'t mesh.
If i were you i\'d consider adding to this. Add the same object again, different colour, different angle, make it more of a composition and less of an illustration. Good idea and good skill, execution could use some more work.
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